Hi Carl,
I don’t know if you’ve ever heard this, but it works nicely. Giving an English haiku the rhythm of Moonlight In Vermont results in an easy read:
Pennies in a stream
Falling leaves a sycamore
Moonlight in Vermont
Icy finger waves
Ski trails on a mountain side
Snowlight in Vermont
Evening summer breeze
Warbling of a meadowlark
Moonlight in Vermont
etc.
A tip I got from
Someone many summers past
Always works for me. 😉
Bill
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A charming poem
Notions seep into my brain
So much more to learn
Though I wrote a tanka here
I love what you just shared Bill
Likum thin’un heaps.
Hi Carl,
I don’t know if you’ve ever heard this, but it works nicely. Giving an English haiku the rhythm of Moonlight In Vermont results in an easy read:
Pennies in a stream
Falling leaves a sycamore
Moonlight in Vermont
Icy finger waves
Ski trails on a mountain side
Snowlight in Vermont
Evening summer breeze
Warbling of a meadowlark
Moonlight in Vermont
etc.
A tip I got from
Someone many summers past
Always works for me. 😉
Bill
A charming poem
Notions seep into my brain
So much more to learn
Though I wrote a tanka here
I love what you just shared Bill