This night was lovely
Walking alone with my thoughts
While the sun descends
An evening walk: tonight’s haiku
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Chaos Tamer
I’m wondering if the last line is supposed to end with descends. I’m not trying to correct your writing, of course, but wanted to mention it just in case an inadvertent error occurred.
You’re spot on. Autocorrect has been duplicating lines lately. Don’t know why.
You’ll see that I’ve updated the post. Thanks so very much for catching that, Dave.